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Author Name: Freeapoetswork897 4 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2008 11:09:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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“Touch Me”
                                                           September 24, 2008
 
Touch me with your curious hands- -

Touch me with your eyes that wonder- -

Touch me with your sight- -

Touch my soft face as you glide your hands up and down my cheek letting the lines tell your story of a struggling passion! How deep your thoughts think and how fast your heart beats…..

Relax your feet and stay awhile

Relax your mind and stay awhile

Relax your eyes and rest awhile

Relax your mind and clear your thoughts awhile.

Come lay next to me put one arm around me and touch me!

Just for a while…

Smile just for a while

Laugh with me keep me company and I’ll keep yours

Spread your hands apart and let me place mine in between the missing spaces.

Maybe for a while we could take a walk down an unknown path that only minds have traveled down but never left footprints… Just for awhile….

Author's Notes:
i got this idea from a poem i also read called touch me i just made it into my own version.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKevin Nixon on December 9, 2014 01:42:11 AM Report
Very interesting. Keep up the good work.
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on August 19, 2009 06:41:24 PM Report
This is a wonderful rendition Mary!
Bravo!
Fletch

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 25, 2008 11:27:17 PM Report
Hello, Mary;

 

Very nice.. I love the way your words flowed with each verse... The last line was my favorite!! I must watch out for more from you.. You have a unique style..

 

Hugs,

~MoonStar~

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 25, 2008 02:32:49 PM Report
Touch is a wonderful way to express love and healing. A lovely poem Mary. I loved your version of "touch me".

~Cindy





 


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