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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: September 26, 2008 16:09:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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One Wish
What would you wish for if you had one wish,
satisfaction guaranteed, well established?
Would you want all power as Queen or King,
to touch the lives of every living being?
 
Satisfaction guaranteed, well established,
would you, in a little pond, be a big fish?
“Be careful what you wish for,” a point to ponder.
When it comes to my dream, I often wonder.
 
Would you want all power as Queen or King?
That kind of control is a dangerous thing.
Riches can sometimes be a risky business,
explaining your wind-fall to the IRS.
 
To touch the lives of every living being,
my imagination soars and takes wing,
trying to think of wishes that aren’t selfish.
What would you wish for if you had one wish?
Author's Notes:
An attempt at a Lilibonelle.  After reading one by Cindy, I wanted to try one.  I hope it's OK
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 16, 2008 09:20:01 AM Report
I think you did this style with style! good job I love writing new styles of poetr it gets my creativity flowing... I really like what you did here!
jen

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 29, 2008 07:13:29 PM Report
Best bonaville I have ever read... I wish I had a horse so this begger could ride.. :o)..len
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 29, 2008 07:14:06 AM Report
Certainly an interesting piece with some contempative  questions to dwell on.

I dont know the rules of a Lilibonelle, but this is a great piece.

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 26, 2008 04:34:48 PM Report
Oh this is amazing to read I think you touched all bases.. be so careful what you wish for... Great poem thoughts to ponder...
IT... may bite you in the A@
 Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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