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Author Name: Freepenfold18 10 Comments
Date Added: October 06, 2008 00:10:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Give To Me The Tenderness
Give to me the tenderness
The passion of a kiss
And forever shall return to you
A necture that is bliss
All the colours of the rainbow
To the sweetness of your touch
As your whispered words of romance
Now envelope me as much
You are the sun that falls upon me
The cloak that darkness brings
The very thought that passes by
With every bird that sings
You are the breath upon my lips
The very air I breathe
And should you trespass in my heart
A tapestry I'll weave
And one that shows the love within
The passion and desire
But also of the tears that fall
To quench the burning fire.
Author's Notes:
I wrote a poem earlier
Entitled blessing or curse and then left an about
this is the result of a request to extend and complete that what I started.
Hope you enjoy it.
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Comment By: FreeLorraina on October 8, 2008 11:15:05 AM Report
poetry in sweet motion...Connie
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 8, 2008 09:48:29 AM Report
I am in love with these words. They reach right to the very soul.

Beautiful my friend what a write....Angel sighs ....


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 8, 2008 09:10:16 AM Report
I did indeed.

It was a sing song romantic piece stamped with your own style of presentation

Ali x

Comment By: FreeBen Hurt on October 8, 2008 04:47:56 AM Report
Your writing speaks for itself, all I can say is wonderful just wonderful
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 8, 2008 04:17:44 AM Report

A very romantic piece Graham, I like this a lot. Joe

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 6, 2008 10:06:18 AM Report
Sir Graham,
 Oh how you enchant the ladies with your very romantic heart .... And should  you tresspress in my heart
A tapestry I shall weave ...I love this...
 I was so inspired by this poem I just posted a poem...Desire ~**~ Makes Me Weak
 See what you did...
 Love ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGlata on October 6, 2008 07:04:53 AM Report
Ah, Graham...Absolutely beautiful! As always, your rhyme and meter are perfect, and the words flow with such ease...You're a true artist of  words, my friend!

Amazing work here!


Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on October 6, 2008 06:21:11 AM Report
Graham, great writing.................. john
Comment By: FreeAdri on October 6, 2008 05:26:18 AM Report
This is too beautiful Graham!  Soft and tender.  Just gorgeous!
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 6, 2008 12:36:36 AM Report
Uh huh, oh most certainly deliver! Wow Graham - every verse weaves a tapestry of love. "you are the breath upon my lips"...mmmm, loved this! I have enjoyed this romantic poem from "Give" to "fire". *smiles* Good stuff! =))




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