| Comment By: Amy on April 29, 2009 08:43:52 PM
awww...i love everything about this penning....the title, rhythm, and rhyme. It's all good.
| Comment By: Glata on February 25, 2009 07:36:34 AM
I've done this same dance in the rain, John...so I understand the need to avoid letting the sun catch you crying :o)
| Comment By: Joe McNinney on January 22, 2009 05:48:50 AM
|Very nicely done John, Joe|
| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on October 18, 2008 03:36:43 PM
|give me some of what you are on? I need it ;-)|
| Comment By: Lorraina on October 7, 2008 04:24:03 PM
|I agree with India a great read. It carries a feeling of nostalgic romance leaving the reader with a soothing hope..Connie |
| Comment By: Adri on October 7, 2008 02:00:44 AM
|Wow John, this is something very special. Your words just sooths the soul. |
Absolutely stunning, but what else can we expect...
| Comment By: Steve on October 6, 2008 01:34:08 PM
|Words and emotions blended into a very romantic poem John. |
| Comment By: Angel on October 6, 2008 01:10:55 PM
John beautiful my wonderful dear friend. Your words say so much to the heart. So glad to see that you are back have missed you so much
Smiles Love Angelxx
| Comment By: She Whispers on October 6, 2008 12:23:25 PM
I dance in the rain
the sun won't catch me crying
She watches the trickling teardrops of rain
and her helpless heart with love is sighing
a safer place i need to land
until then i will keep on flying.
She know the burning love in his romantic heart
she knows he loves her his way
it will never depart
Great to read a love poem again..
What can I say you inspire me...
Hugs ~She whispers