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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 20 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2008 10:10:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Light in your eyes ~ A villanelle ~

There is a light, where there was none before

It can be seen in the sparkle of your eyes

That keeps me yearning for more

**

My heart has the need to explore

There has to be a reason why

There is a light, where there was none before
 
**

It is no secret, that it's you I adore

It is your gentle touch

That keeps me yearning for more
 
**

Fast asleep, sunlight hits the floor

You open up your beautiful eyes

There is a light, where there was none before

**

I kiss you gladly, you don't have to implore

It is the taste of your lips

That keeps me yearning for more

**

Your eyes glow like a beautiful sunrise

Like an artist's perfect rending

There is a light, where there was none before

That keeps me yearning for more

 

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on November 24, 2008 10:03:39 PM Report
Henry -  I really like the way you put this together, it demonstrates a mastery of the genre and a loving insight of the person for whom it was intended.

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 23, 2008 02:38:31 PM Report
Beautiful melting write congrats Henry chicken
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on November 16, 2008 08:59:35 PM Report
A winning Villanelle...very deserving Henry...Love it... so sweet & sensual...great write...CONGRATULATIONS

Comment By: FreeGlata on October 23, 2008 06:26:39 AM Report
Absolutely a deserving piece, and  I see I'm not the only one to feel that way. The one that lights your world enough  to inspire you write this beautiful piece is blessed!

Congrats to you!

Glata

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on October 20, 2008 08:04:57 PM Report
Congrats Henry! I just loved this the first time I read it and I am so happy you won the award.

Hugs

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 20, 2008 06:29:00 PM Report
This excellent write would be great as a song, Henry.. It really deserved the coveted Hub Cap award...No nice!! len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 20, 2008 05:47:09 PM Report
OH....WOW!

What a villanelle!

This is EXQUISITE Henry!  Just...hm....a poet at a loss for words---

One of your finest dear friend!

Makes me sigh in a good way. :o)

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 20, 2008 09:26:56 AM Report
Henry:  super congratulations on this marvelous write -- so deserving of the Feature Poem Award.   Keep up the great writes.

 

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 20, 2008 08:41:29 AM Report
Beautiful write Henry..
Congratulations!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 20, 2008 06:15:41 AM Report
Congrats Henry for winning for this piece. Totally brilliant.

Adri x

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 20, 2008 04:16:47 AM Report
Congrats Henry, I'm glad you submitted this. It is so deserved. Joe
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 17, 2008 07:37:41 AM Report
You are the king of romance Henry

Ali x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 16, 2008 12:42:47 AM Report
Very lovely sentiments indeed...absolutely delightful! =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeGlata on October 14, 2008 08:22:23 PM Report
Beautiful, Henry...and  I can  see it is a smashing success!

Lovely...

Hugs....

Glata

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on October 14, 2008 06:55:29 PM Report
Beautifully written Henry...good rhymes, balance, just enough...."sparkle of your eyes" you are a fortunate one still....see my "Lovejoy" for more sparkling eyes...

Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 14, 2008 03:40:35 PM Report
well you had me from beginning to end. so so beautiful! I love  to read this style of poetry, I really love when it is one of your poems~

Jen

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on October 14, 2008 11:47:03 AM Report
You know how much I love villanelles and Henry this is a brilliant gem! So romantic and soooooo beautiful. Excellent!!!

Going to my faves for sure.

~Cindy

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 14, 2008 10:55:11 AM Report
Now this is cool! I like this a lot Henry, you ole romantic you. Joe
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 14, 2008 10:28:43 AM Report
Henry,
 Sighhh.. oh this love for your beautiful lady shines as brilliant as a summer day.... She will smiles through happy tears when she reads this.... Love is grand isn't it??
Hugs to you both..
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 14, 2008 10:22:03 AM Report
Henry:  beautifully written. 

 

Lady D





 


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