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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 13 Comments
Date Added: November 06, 2008 15:11:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The demon
I'm fighting this demon that cloaks my soul.
Darkening the images of beauty.
Surrounding me with it's darkness.
Surrendering to it's control.
My pleas do not release the demon's grip.
His laughter echoes within the spaces of my mind
and I laugh to encourage a smile,
while he laughs for he has won.

Author's Notes:
just writing. I can't come up with a title. Any suggestions?
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Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on April 27, 2010 08:42:15 PM Report
I think we all suffer our own demons.  Hauntingly beautiful have you penned this Helen...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeAdelle on November 5, 2009 09:02:47 PM Report
this was really amazing. short and simple, but at the same time in great depth. good work
Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 14, 2009 01:04:49 AM Report
The Demon in me. Seems like a good title. Good write Helen.

                                                                            John

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on May 16, 2009 12:33:09 PM Report
There are many demons all around us, which try to dominate our hearts, minds, emotions, feelings, body charms and soul as well....... Your poem is sweet, deep and wonderful, which can be generalised to so many demons my dear friend!

Regards

Mujtaba! 

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on February 15, 2009 11:00:23 AM Report
The demons we fight are always within ourselves. I think you named this poem right Helen, great writing!  Henry
Comment By: FreeKenneth Hoffman on December 22, 2008 01:26:12 PM Report
 How about 'Battleing Evil'.  A scary poem for I have been there.

 

Comment By: FreeJust a girl on December 22, 2008 12:30:14 PM Report

I think the title you have, "The Demon" fits it well. Very good write!


Comment By: FreeJust a girl on December 22, 2008 12:30:03 PM Report

I think the title you have, "The Demon" fits it well. Very good write!


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 7, 2008 07:40:34 PM Report
This is a topic many can relate to. How about "The Demon" for a title. Well said Helen.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on November 7, 2008 12:25:12 PM Report
Personal demonds sounds good.
I like this one

Fletch

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 7, 2008 06:16:32 AM Report
No suggestions, for titles are MY personal demons, lol...but this is certainly a powerful and intense write, Helen.

The darkness brought on by this type of demon is too real and too powerful at times..........

Love this, and can relate!

Hugs...and good to  see  you posting again!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 6, 2008 08:56:27 PM Report
I think Steves title is perfect...we all have our demons...
 HUgs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on November 6, 2008 04:42:30 PM Report

A dark and emotionally graphic write that conveys a timeless struggle.  Well done.  How about "Personal Demons" we all have them. 






 


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