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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 17 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2008 03:11:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Caramel Sin
The evening was a whirlwind -
we were all frenzied and taut,
bodies shaking and grinding
with none of those wasted moments
of precious and too little time.
Tomorrow would come, but tonight
my longing for you became a desire
to hold you close and press my lips
to your rich black-diamond skin.
I slipped my tongue into your wet
essence, delving into the dark
depths of your liquid delights.
My pulse quickened as your fluids
rushed over my palate
like a
Jamaican waterfall
of melted creamy caramel sin.
I swallowed the first crescendo of
satisfaction and reached for you
again and again and again,
until my need was sated
and I switched to decaf.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freejohn carter on April 29, 2009 07:48:57 PM Report
Hello. I Surrender i place my white flag.

                                                     

Comment By: FreeEllis Beck on April 6, 2009 07:48:45 PM Report
This is very very witty :)

 

I really enjoyed it

 

E.B  x

Comment By: FreeAngel on January 15, 2009 09:55:20 AM Report
Wow this was amazing. Superb. My blood pressure has gone up

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 19, 2008 02:47:29 AM Report
O.K. you got me,but I so enjoyed getting caught, this was a visual fantasy from start to end, it may take a while to get this out of my head but who cares~Graham.
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on November 13, 2008 05:39:03 PM Report
This is great! Love the coffee reference.  aaron

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on November 12, 2008 05:32:30 PM Report
Starbucks has a lot to answer for! Hahahaha... I like a hot Macechino myself..
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on November 12, 2008 03:32:30 PM Report
Jody- Some one told me about this one when they read my latest. Only you could write such an O De(ar) to a cup of coffee.  Wonderfully done.

 

 

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 10, 2008 02:57:10 PM Report
I will never look at at creamy caramel the way I used to. 
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 8, 2008 11:25:11 PM Report
OU KID!! At first, I thought you were just excited about the Obama landslide victory...Now Palin will have more time to study geography and find out if Africa is a continent or a country....Very clever write, darlin'...You had me fooled all the way. It took me a couple of seconds after reading the last line to realize I'd been snookered.. :o).yereverlovinfurball
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 8, 2008 11:07:06 PM Report
I have to admit you had me going here Jody! I thought this was going to be one of your patented erotica writes, but I was wrong. You did make the beverage very sensual though.  Henry
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on November 8, 2008 05:45:14 PM Report
I thought I was reading Naughty stuff here. What a pleasent write.
Love the Carmel sin...again and again and again. You are tops! Sensual Indeed!

Yours .....Fletch

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 8, 2008 11:12:01 AM Report
LMAO....hey girl, the last line spoiled it all. *teasing* Oh this was delicious but I can assure you I wasn't thinking about coffee at all. (I'm just going to ignore that last line) Woooo hooooo...loved this you little trickster you!!  =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 8, 2008 10:16:20 AM Report
Ms SS:  now I almost switched this to Adult Erotica!!!!  WOW!!!!  But I so agree with this write............and am sooooo guilty of THIS sin!!!!  OH YES!!!!

 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 8, 2008 09:28:08 AM Report
You naughty, naughty  lady you had me going with the senses rising with each sensual word
I could just vision everything .....then bang....Caramel Sin Coffee!!

Your so bad everyone will love this!!!
Jolen your the very best writer... Write on Sister!!
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on November 8, 2008 07:27:32 AM Report
A Starbucks love affair hot and tasty. :-)
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 8, 2008 05:22:55 AM Report
Jolen you led me up the garden path right up to the last line! Hilarious RAOTFLMAO!!

 

David

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 8, 2008 04:36:37 AM Report

OMG you got me..you got me gooooood!
I thought you were back to writing your naughty stuf!!! LOL LOL

Ali x0x





 


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