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Author Name: Premiumskipinpin 9 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2008 20:11:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A PASSING .. sonnet

This time she appeared like a summer breeze,

from dark shadows drying the morning dew.

She floats gracefully like butterflies do,

coming towards you like a new mystery,

one flower to another silently,

bathed in jasmine odor and lilac hues.

  Amazed by the wonderful sight of you,

so overwhelmed by such a rare beauty.


You feel her long hair caressing your chest,

her passionate whisper a final test,

as she moves slowly pass you, relentless,

expressing eternal love she goes by.

To a million colors you close your eyes,

lay down comfortably smiling and die.


Author's Notes:
Just doing a sonnet...I have no intention of dying, got too much living to do yet...
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on December 16, 2008 03:30:45 PM Report
Raymond- Where so many view dealth as life's final insult (or assault) this poem paints the event in a more hopeful hue.  I a great many cases, where it is the natural culmination of life or our many maladies, it comes precisely as you stated here.   Good write

 

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: Freeaaron payne on December 11, 2008 10:32:00 AM Report
very nice. good flow. aaron

Comment By: FreeAngelique on November 15, 2008 05:50:34 PM Report

Such a lovely written poem!


take care,


angelique


Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 15, 2008 04:27:23 PM Report
Full of warmth, love and caring Raymond. Glad to hear that you've no plans on leaving us just yet!   Henry
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 14, 2008 07:12:14 PM Report

Wow, what an ending.  Thought maybe something else was going to happen.  Seriously though, I thing you did a fantastic job on the sonnet. 


Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 12, 2008 07:10:56 AM Report
This was beautiful indeed. I am no good at all at form poetry, although someday, someday, I wil try to conquer the sonnet. There are some here who do them quite well, David Turner for one, is a master! Anyway, I thought you did quite nicely with the whole write. I am no good at telling you if it is correct form or not, but I CAN tell you the wording was just as tender as it gets.
Now I know what goes on in a MAN'S head at times, lol..
And whata way to go if you were going! ahhhhhhhhhhhhh....
nice work,
b

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 11, 2008 09:46:37 PM Report
Loving, sad and tender Raymond. Very nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 11, 2008 09:27:59 PM Report
Sounds like a woman who is such a mystery and yet you reveal her with the colors of nature..
Your love in poetic poems

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on November 11, 2008 09:03:17 PM Report
Well I should hope so!!! That was beautiful.. It actually brought tears to my eyes..

 

Thank you...

MoonStar  





 


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