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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: November 14, 2008 22:11:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Faithful ~*~ Letters

We cannot direct love even if we try
for it finds its own destiny course
 then we know the reason why

To know the secrets of the captive heart
love has no other desires except fulfilling
itself melting with passionate bliss
  as one with a lovers kiss

You may give someone your testifying love
 they only borrow your wishful thoughts
for just a little while

Reading each others faithful love letters
it captures the adoring playful eyes
with flirting whispering smiles

 

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Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 16, 2008 01:17:13 AM Report
Love is such a mysterious creature..when it hits you, it can be a very passionate ride
even if its for a short time...no planning, no hesitation..I like this hun--
Hugs,
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 15, 2008 04:25:02 PM Report
No way can you plan love it flows from the soul and meets with anothers. We have no control over the stong emotions felt.

 

Brilliant

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 15, 2008 11:07:50 AM Report
Lovely India - the contradiction is very evocative:-

 

love has no other desires except fulfilling
itself melting with passionate bliss
 united together as one
with a lovers kiss


 

 

against

 

they only borrow your wishful thoughts
for just a little while

 


I think meaning that lovers who are separated by time and space desire the first must be content with the second


 


Could you not improve the symetry of the piece and sharpen its focus by making the second verse 3 lines as well?:-

 

Perhaps:-

 

Love has no other desires except fulfilling
itself melting with passionate bliss 

together as one with a lovers kiss

 

love

 

David


 

Comment By: FreeJennifer on November 15, 2008 10:03:45 AM Report
oooooohhhhh! My dear I feel ya here!!!! nice write,

jen

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 15, 2008 04:07:00 AM Report
LOve happens....Planning is a complete waste of time and energy...That's the glory of-that's the story of love.....Red Eagle




 


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