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Author Name: Freejaneworld 1 Comments
Date Added: November 28, 2008 12:11:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Horror Add To Favorites | Text Only
What if we all went to hell
it's true no one can tell
they say it's disgusting
and body's are rotting
what if we all went to hell

What if we all went to hell
the smell of corpses burning
then blows of grenade
theirs no way of returning
it'll put an end to this charade
what if we all went to hell

They beat us with knives
and leave open wound slashes
and still they keep us alive
then drown us in acid

What if we all went to hell
it doesn't sound lovely
don't cry and don't worry
soon we all gonna die

So be a better son
and be a greater daughter
and die by your fathers
what if we all went to hell

Author's Notes:
this was just a very terrifying thought that
just somehow satisfied my anger that day
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Comment By: FreeSteve on December 13, 2008 04:40:22 PM Report
A very original write.  Venting usually helps when you are angry.  I would be interested in reading a poem you wrote on a really good day for a comparison.


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