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Author Name: Freemaybememories 5 Comments
Date Added: December 08, 2008 21:12:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Poets love deeper
She said she never loved a poet before just some guys who said they liked the beach
Oh cliche, I asked her what lessons she had learned she said the ones only life can teach

I told her I would love her forever, but how could she tell she could ever really know
So I showed her what I wrote, the poems that marked my life, the ones that showed my soul

She said she liked my pen, but these words came from being slung in the mud
I told her don't compliment the ink because these thoughts were written with my blood

So she said then bleed on these pages and let your ink run a river if you're a bleeder
Haha what a clever reader, I told her if she took a leap then she'd become a believer

She never loved a poet so she asked me if she left everything behind would I really keep her?
I told her the men who loved her before were shallow and weaker because baby, poets love deeper
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMary on December 9, 2008 09:59:47 AM Report
this was a very cool poem...it showed very expressful and well thought out emotion

as i always say

keep inking it

mary

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on December 9, 2008 01:07:40 AM Report
Why you poetic soul you!!

 

A romantic one at that!

This, I like.. It's the real you...

 

 

Hugs,

Moonie (Lunie)

 

Comment By: FreeA.P. on December 8, 2008 10:46:12 PM Report
i really enjoyed the parts about ink and blood, i thought you expressed that beautifully...and i liked the idea behind this, working as a story behind emotions...
nicely done.

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on December 8, 2008 10:03:49 PM Report
I like the flow of this one.

You have style my friend.

Fletch

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 8, 2008 10:02:52 PM Report
Poets are so romantic.. Our hearts become lovers
 Beautiful...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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