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Author Name: Freelighter 3 Comments
Date Added: December 16, 2008 05:12:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Her.
Her decaying mind
Shows her picture of nothing
but of a forgotten past

Her violent tongue
Speaks nothing but only what
she wants to say

Her tired eyes
Close over to hide when
everything is displayed.
Author's Notes:
4.09.08
I don't normaly like what I write.But for once I do.I like this poem.Your thoughts on it please?
Thank you for reading.
em.X
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMahala Rose on December 16, 2008 03:02:07 PM Report

powerful in so few lines


Comment By: Freebloodytears on December 16, 2008 10:46:54 AM Report
this is dee and makes others that feel this way know they arent alone.
Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 16, 2008 09:15:39 AM Report
I can relate, I say what I wasnt and it ALWAYS gets me in trouble! I Like this especially how it ends, tired eyes close over to hide,  There is so much truth in peoples eyes. That is how I know when my daughter is lying I can see it in her eyes lol Good job on this short little peice, that speaks volumes!
jen





 


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