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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: January 20, 2009 11:01:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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 It sad to think were not going to make it my darling
 It got to the point we can’t fake it anymore 
still why can’t we just say goodbye

Through the years we both have sighed
and with tears have also cried

Why can’t we just turn away letting it die
 It seems there is no happy ending
going our separate distant ways
was that the only answer
Author's Notes:
Another poem I wrote late one night and never posted ......
He hurt me so very badly .....I went into a cloak of depression
He nearly destroyed me for I am only a mortal woman with my weakness
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Comment By: FreeLeila on January 5, 2010 12:44:00 PM Report
Thank you for this hormony used in your poem.


Comment By: FreeAngel on January 23, 2009 08:18:50 AM Report
Oh love can be so very cruel beautiful lady. When your heart is broken it like a void no one else can fill or feel. Like a dark cloud that forever rains down on you. Been to this dark place and what a journey it is clawing your way back to smile. You are all woman my friend and heartache is not a weakness just pain. It is part of who you are. A person who is loved dearly by friends and others around her. Your love shines like a beacon in the night for others to share. I thank you for being my light when that dark cloud covered. I am here always my friend and whenever you need a friend just whisper in my ear. I am but a heartbeat away hun


Love u


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeS on January 20, 2009 07:58:47 PM Report
ah, mortality
funny thing isnt it

awesome poem

Comment By: FreeAmy on January 20, 2009 01:55:05 PM Report

I'm sorry for the heartache you've faced. It is reflected in this poem. I was moved.

Best wishes, hon.


Comment By: FreeSammie on January 20, 2009 12:56:09 PM Report
This is very sad.... But well written.

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 20, 2009 11:47:58 AM Report
She: very heart-felt write.  So sad, and something we all have dealt with.

Lady D


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