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Author Name: Freefalling_angel 2 Comments
Date Added: January 23, 2009 12:01:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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what will happen?
Breathing quickens
fear sets in
cold chills race down my spine
eyes widen
as i try to scream
nothing can be heard
i feel death coming
blood slowly pooling around me
the color of crimson red
trembling and shaking
crying tears of fright
not knowing where i am
or what to do
everything is a blur
slowly i feel my self growing cold
i fall to the ground
wondering will i ever be saved
or am i abandoned
left here
to slowly and painful
die alone.
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Comment By: FreeGlata on February 2, 2009 04:54:58 PM Report
Sometimes death seems to be a welcomed embrace, but it doesn't cure what is going on. When we face down the thing that brings us so much pain and do what we can to make sure it doesn't happen to another person...THAT is what brings the cure.

Hang in there, Haylee...You possess a strength that would amaze you. It just takes you reaching in and finding it.

 

Hugs and always here for you...

glata

Comment By: FreeAngelface on January 23, 2009 01:44:51 PM Report

 

 

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Are you okay? Jo and I worry a lot about you! I pray for you often! Death will not solve things with your family! But will only make things worse! Plz if you feel like you are about to really commit suicide.. please go talk to ur pastor or a counselor. I am by no means a counselor! I can only help as i can those who are willing to help them selves! You don't have to let life get u down! Pray out to GOD! God is listen he has been listen to you! So return the favor! Search your heart, donít look back. Have faith and be grateful for your life! For everything good and bad, God has a purpose! Please don't interfere with that purpose!


GOD BLESS YOU


Angelface






 


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