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Author Name: Freeseeker 1 Comments
Date Added: January 29, 2009 11:01:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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PERFECTION
We have no time
and no where
and no place
and no room
for error….

Breath on your own dime

Tick, tick, tick…
It's the metronomic
rhythm that over shadows the
beat, beat, beat
of our own hearts
Yes, yes, yes….
they bleed red
but we’re making GREEN today

No time

No time

No time, because the minutes were wasted
for some one else’s dollar

But,
slavery is abolished.....

Yeah, ……Sure

We’re a slave to everything including our own hearts
and we’ve not made a decision of our own in years
hunger tells us when it’s time to eat
our wallets tell us when it’s time to work
our hearts tell us when it’s time to love
while our souls
well…… there’ll be time for one of those later
if it doesn’t get put up for auction on eBay…..
one has to eat

No rest for the wicked
and we’re all wicked
[oh, didn’t you know?.....
it’s a well kept secret I suppose]
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAmy on January 29, 2009 02:11:08 PM Report
omg...this is the best *****

It's so spot on sardonic. I loved it. It's all your style but over-the-top good. Of everything I've read of yours, I really liked this best.

~Amy

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