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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: February 16, 2009 23:02:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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No Looking Back
Please let my heart go free
 
Turn me loose and let me be
 
Remove your selfish spell
 
Deliver me from emotional hell
 
Release me from the desire
 
Stop the feelings put out the fire
 
I hate loving you like I do
 
Only this I know to be true
 
You make love a crying shame
 
To you itís like playing game
 
Itís not love thatís going to kill
 

But a broken heart that lost the will

 

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Comment By: FreesHeRi on March 22, 2010 05:46:03 PM Report
yes broken hearts are hard to repair..they lose their beat when they lose their mate.

great poem Steve,

Sheri

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on December 2, 2009 05:36:23 PM Report
I once had a best friend who made things like this for my other best friend...and all of us are still trying to get past it.

 

Spot on

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeAdri on April 21, 2009 04:50:53 AM Report
Greatly emotional piece.  I missed your work wile I was away. 

As always raw and real
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLorraina on April 7, 2009 10:08:30 AM Report
There are guys  that also leave  us women feeling like this...The question is why do the nice people end up with these worthless people?? Maybe it's our own caring heart that keeps the link going when those that are going have gone..Good write Steve  Connie
Comment By: FreeAngel on March 31, 2009 01:25:23 PM Report
Love can make one feel alive and like one has died. Very deep emotional write Steve. Not a nice place for anyone to be

 

Beautiful

 

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 18, 2009 07:47:44 PM Report
Shot down in flames by the big guns of love...This reminds me of a relationship I had with a stripper named Heather... She was beautiful, but she wouldn't be true...They just don't make strippers with the moral fiber they had back in the days!!!...len
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on February 18, 2009 11:51:19 AM Report
Well crafted poetry Steve
Bravo!
Fletch

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on February 17, 2009 10:29:38 PM Report
Not a good place to be at the moment. Wish you the best.  Keep writing the emotions down.

 

 

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 17, 2009 11:55:23 AM Report
I think you are putting all of the responsibility on the other party. Is love a spell (yes would conveniently shift blame to whomever casts the "spell) or is it a mutual union of hearts where both parties excersise freedom of choice to be emotionally joined. If this love is an emotional hell then find the strength within yourself to end it -- in defence of the other party involved who would want to continue to love a person who finds the love they have found to be "an emotional hell"? "You make love a crying shame" ... a strong and hurtful judgement to which I say, "and you allow yourself to be a part of it". Take responsibility and walk away -- you are obviously staying for reasons that you refuse to acknowledge. This poem is GREAT food for thought. Nice expression Steve. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 17, 2009 11:01:53 AM Report
 So sensitive this poem is... I have felt the same way my dear friend...
 YOur comments on my poems I appreciate so much...
 Have  A Great day....
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on February 17, 2009 04:07:36 AM Report
Steve, interesting write here. thoroughly enjoyed, john




 


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