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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 8 Comments
Date Added: February 23, 2009 20:02:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Yea Joe, I will have to Admit it
You are pretty smooth...
But you will call me Master
Once I'm through with you
Be careful now girl
you will see that I'm the best
In fact, I can prove it
I have never failed a test

You're Probably not half Bad
But yo're nothing compared to me
This test you've never had
It will bring you to your knees

And trust me you will like it
You will obey my every command
You will be submissive
I have my whip in hand
Whip me, beat me, do what you will
you will find that I have tough skin
In fact, the whipping would be a thrill
but know that I would never give in

I won't need any whips
I have my eyes and my hands
Just one kiss upon these lips
and my wish is your command

One kiss you say is what it takes
to bend me to your will
You too will learn I won't brake
I've come to conquer..To Kill!

I will be your Goddess
I'll go down in history
I'll will be know as the girl
Who dominated Joe McNinney!
Author's Notes:

This was co-written with Sammie. It started out as a simple IM, then became this. Thank you so much Sammie, this was fun. Just for the record, I let you win! LOL!

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Comment By: Freeken on October 14, 2012 01:08:31 AM Report
One would think it impossible for a dance to be fluid when both parties lead

yet here passion prevails :)


Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on May 2, 2009 12:14:41 PM Report
Nice to be dominated by the opposite sex sometimes Joe. A fun write indeed!


Sharon JJ

Comment By: FreeJulie on March 1, 2009 04:08:27 PM Report
This was a lot of fun to read...the only thing that would have been better would have been Pat Benetar playing her anthem "Love Is A Battlefield" in the background.  Seriously, this was really great.  Props to you and Sammie both!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 26, 2009 06:40:27 PM Report
Yeah, sure you let her win!!! Looks to me like your new romantic intrest has already "WHIPPED" you into submission! LOLOL.   Henry
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 25, 2009 07:17:00 AM Report
Hey, with a smile like that, Ms. Sammie will have you begging for her attentions! LOL Way to go, Sammie! Someone finally got the best of our Joe...and I don't believe for a second that he LET you win! (grins)

Hugs and cheers ;o)


Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on February 24, 2009 07:33:41 PM Report
Fun Write you two.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 23, 2009 10:19:13 PM Report
Joe, I think you finally met your match.... She is beautiful , smart and witty....
 Great poem...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSammie on February 23, 2009 08:37:39 PM Report

But thank you Joe. This was very Fun.




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