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Author Name: Freequeens1 3 Comments
Date Added: March 11, 2009 01:03:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Eternal Flame

Enduring love is an eternal flame,

borne of mutual happiness, desire,

bathing each soul in light and warmth, the same.

 
A living thing, not meant for a frame,

two hearts being fuel for the fire.

Enduring love is an eternal flame.

 
True emotional highs, worthy of fame,

adding heat so the fire won’t expire,

bathing each soul in light and warmth, the same.

 
When I breathe out and you breathe in to claim

air that allows the fire to respire,

enduring love is an eternal flame.

 
Elemental trio sings a refrain,

birthing fires that shall never tire,

bathing each soul in light and warmth, the same.

 
You breathe out, I breathe in to play the game

began by our Almighty Sire.

Enduring love is an eternal flame,

bathing each soul in light and warmth, the same.
 
 
 
 
 
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Author's Notes:
Going back to form poetry with a Villanelle. 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on September 13, 2009 10:03:45 AM Report
Every word of your sweet and exquisite poem reveals the dexterity of your blesed imagination of superb diction!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 16, 2009 07:57:00 PM Report
They got one thing in common...They got the fire down below..... I always thought the male/female bonding is like one spirit seperated and trying to bond again...That would go for gays, too, of course...Every soul is incomplete without another....Very nicely worded, Pen...len
Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 8, 2009 10:21:47 AM Report
mmmmmmmm You do this form WONDERFULLY! What a pro!
Jen





 


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