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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: November 28, 2010 09:11:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Creature of Crumbling Clay
A Creature of Crumbling Clay
At lunch I sometimes get looks and stares
When I bow my head to say my prayers.
Do you really talk to Him, the Almighty Fellow?
Do you really pray over your bowl of Jell-o?
Yes, we must be grateful for even the little things
If we expect to be guided by the Truth that rings.
I  truly believe I must petition the One up obove
Because He gave me this life and filled it with Love.
And if I failed to ask for  his forgiveness each day,
How could I stand...a mere creature of crumbling clay?
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Comment By: FreeRobert on November 28, 2010 10:16:18 AM Report
Very astute, I really enjoyed this, gives one pause it does.
Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 25, 2009 02:07:19 AM Report
Aw. I like it. I guess my heart isn't as close to God anymore as it used to be I'm sorry to say. I've been hurt. But sometimes I ask for guidence and want to come back to Him. I guess I would pray because it would be like inviting Him to eat with me. So we can eat together as a family. Do I sound silly? LOL.
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 24, 2009 10:48:54 PM Report
Wonderful expressive write!   I like it a lot.


Comment By: FreeTina Steele on March 23, 2009 12:56:52 PM Report
i love this. not only is it very inspirational but it also touches upon many key points. i think that the bi-standers who stare as u pray are rather curious themselves about religion and God's glory but are either to scared/nervous to attempt it themselves or they just don't know how to go about talking to God themselves. great poem. :)

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 23, 2009 11:58:50 AM Report

We have become too big for our boots...we are like the children of the desert who made the golden calf...but its all going to be made right
Ali x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 23, 2009 09:57:26 AM Report
Very inspiring write.  I felt a lot from this one.


Lady D


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