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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 5 Comments
Date Added: April 19, 2009 10:04:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Shine
my two little twinkle stars
shine all the night upon me
my two little bluebirds
fly all the day in the sky
never tire out, my little warriors!
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Comment By: FreeToria on June 17, 2009 12:59:47 PM Report
I think Lenaordx was a little rough with his words. Rude (cough)*

Obvioulsy he didnt get the poem.

 

I liked it; very much!

 

You commented one of my poems, & i thought you were really sweet with what you said.

Your writing inspires me. : )

Truly a lovely lady.

 

~ Toria

Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 10, 2009 04:19:54 PM Report
My children twinkle like stars

 And i thank the heavens.

                               John

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 21, 2009 08:04:13 PM Report
I don't really think this is a haiku, but I couldn't care less. :o)..I'm not one for structuring poetery, anyway...Is this about birds, stars, both or neither??...len
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 21, 2009 07:44:02 PM Report
I don't really think this is a haiku, but I couldn't care less. :o)..I'm not one for structuring poetery, anyway...Is this about birds, stars, both or neither??...len
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 21, 2009 07:46:55 AM Report
Ahhh ...............Nothing like nature to inspire us!

I love the way you write!
Yours ..............Fletch





 


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