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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: April 25, 2009 10:04:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Away
Away
 
Swept away in the tide of life
I remember the rocks
That i clinged to and
The pebbles that touched me.
Words only find open hearts and minds
I hope my words will find you
I have been away
But i am back today
Sunshine always finds the tiniest flower
In the darkest corner of the garden.
 
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 26, 2009 02:09:02 PM Report
Loved this John but would drop the last 3 lines--the poem makes a stronger impact if you end it at "In the darkest corner of the garden". Welcome back!


~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on April 25, 2009 10:05:56 PM Report
Lovely, heartfelt poem, John.

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 25, 2009 09:01:05 PM Report
John,
 We are all so glad your back .. We have missed you my dear.... Sunshine does find the tiniest flower...
 I have missed you ..
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on April 25, 2009 12:36:24 PM Report
you just never know when the words you write will reach the reader and be just the words

that he/she needed to hear!  "words only find open hearts and minds"  They may be nothing about you... or all about you...but either way.. very personal and very touching!  "sunshine always finds the tiniest flower in the darkest corner of the garden" is just the words i was needing to hear...as well as many others i am convinced. With gratitude, shee

Comment By: FreeAdri on April 25, 2009 10:33:57 AM Report
Ahhh that is gorgeous! Been away for a wile too, but back as well.
Love this, glad you are here.
Adri x





 


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