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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: May 18, 2009 19:05:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Longing
Longing
 
What longing she plays softly on my tongue
Finds words and makes them come
I long to find the words
That will surely find her sun
She will find me longing writing gently
Until i kiss her lips.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 19, 2009 07:02:34 PM Report
Such a longing in this poem  for just her!!!
 Very romantic.... You write the best love poems...
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeb doneff on May 19, 2009 03:51:29 PM Report
Yikes! Um, it may be the mood I'm in, but I thought this was hotter than a firecracker! lol  Go on with your kick ass self! ( I'm sure she loved it!)
b

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 19, 2009 02:00:09 AM Report
This is so beautiful. The longing for the one you love takes over all the senses.  I know that longing. 

Love

Adri x





 


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