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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 5 Comments
Date Added: June 01, 2009 08:06:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Gathering Moondust
  I spent the night gathering moondust Couldn't get the stars out of my eyes Dreams tied up with silver ribbons Still sitting there unopened Just like all those other nights.   Warm milk and coconut creme cookies Couldn't chase away my fears Hope tied up with golden ribbons Still sitting there unopened Just like all those other years.   Silently I waited for an early morning visit Greetings and a necklace of warm kisses Promises tied up with pastel ribbons Waiting to be opened  Just like all your other wishes.        
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Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 2, 2009 01:03:58 PM Report
I like the split into stanza's. I think the additional stanza (to me) endorses my original feelings to this write You have much talent.

                                                                                                      John

Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 2, 2009 01:00:47 PM Report
I like the split into stanza's. It reads so much better. The additional stanza adds (to me) and endorses my original feelings. You are very talented.

                                                                                                   John

Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 1, 2009 07:23:28 PM Report
I love the poem i especially love the title. Lovely.

                                                                     John

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 1, 2009 01:13:53 PM Report
You write so well, lady........

Very eloquent and meaningful...written with such apparent ease...
It feels like you just open your mouth and this exquisite eloquence just comes flowing forth.

A born poet~

Hugs,
Pamela 

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 1, 2009 10:22:33 AM Report

Linda Jo:  this is so lovely and wistful.   Warm milk and cookies........


Lady D


 






 


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