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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: June 08, 2009 09:06:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Clouds Passing Over
Clouds Passing Over
 
I dream of nights
With burning skies
The song of birds
So full of sighs
About the spirit
That passes from life.
They sing laments
To dying clouds
That slither by
Without a sound
Until it's time
for them to cry
There tears will flow down
From the sky.
Author's Notes:
My girls and i where at Blueberry Park laid on our backs staring at clouds. Aimee was six and asked the question. "Where do people and animals go when they die?" I replied "We turn into clouds and float away". This poem is almost sixteen years old. I wonder if she remembers.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMoon Fairy on June 8, 2009 09:22:01 PM Report
Nice answer and lovely...
Tracie

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 8, 2009 01:22:25 PM Report
 a sweet write and a sweet 'about' as well.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 8, 2009 01:14:07 PM Report
This is as soft as the clouds and simply stated...an appropriate answer for a child of six. Very nice penning.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 8, 2009 09:43:36 AM Report
That is gorgeous, memories is worth more then gold.
Adri x





 


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