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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: June 08, 2009 17:06:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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First kiss
 
My first kiss
Will be the first time i see you
Deepness in our eyes
With clenched knuckles
I would say "yes"
Pull you closer to my lips
In my kiss
You would feel a want
No words between
Your lips and mine
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFilthy on July 11, 2009 03:46:59 PM Report
I feel strange being the only fella commenting on this! Great stuff though john.
Comment By: FreeAdri on June 9, 2009 02:25:40 AM Report
Oh this is gorgeous, very romantic and soft.  The first kiss, not necessary mean your first kiss as a child, it can also be the first kiss you have with the one that was meant to be with you, your true love. 
Sorry, being all girly and wishful fairy tale now ;o) 

Lovely piece!! 
Adri x

 


 


Comment By: PremiumMoon Fairy on June 8, 2009 07:37:01 PM Report
Sounds like a romantic kiss..the first one's are usually the best.
Good stuff!
~Tracie





 


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