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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: June 11, 2009 18:06:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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See Me
See Me
 
So strange my love
I wanderered through dreams
I found a cluttered mess
Love me
See me.
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Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 14, 2009 11:05:01 PM Report
sometimes with all the clutter we still know where things are at! Love on! write on!
jen

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 12, 2009 07:50:06 PM Report
John this is perfect. Such honesty in your words, that it filled my heart with wonder..

Your pen is a mighty tool of joy..

 

 

Hugs to ya!

Moonie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 12, 2009 06:06:53 PM Report
Well looks like she see through your dreams...
 And smiles....
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeaspiring sage on June 12, 2009 02:07:10 PM Report
I like the simplicity of it.. but i'm not sure i have read it correctly. if you feel unseen what are the dreams referring to. is it a mess because you are  not seen or are you not seen because of the mess?
great poem though
thanks

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 12, 2009 09:54:51 AM Report
Love sees, and it smiles. Sometimes what we need is what we get.
Love
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 12, 2009 01:39:36 AM Report
Sometimes it is necessary to do some housekeeping to get rid of some of those messed up dreams. To see the man and love him and not a dream is very liberating. Expectations can really get in the way. Maybe I'm reading too much into this but that's the way my wee brain works eh... *smiles*

 

~Barbara~





 


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