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Author Name: Freejohncarter 9 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2009 23:06:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Inside of me
Inside of me.
 
Could she be
Inside of me
Can i be
Inside of her.
Take the longing
From my tongue
Place it where you hurt
Put it where i long to be
Inside you
Inside of me.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 4, 2009 08:58:45 AM Report
Aw. It's so sweet.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 16, 2009 12:16:58 PM Report
May love fill both of you. This has a sensual feel to it! =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 16, 2009 08:35:38 AM Report
How beautiful is love when it comes together. You will get what you yearn for.
Love this!!

Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 15, 2009 07:07:35 PM Report
I think you whispered just what you wanted.... Mmmmmm
 She will love this...
 ~ Always She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumMoon Fairy on June 15, 2009 06:39:05 PM Report
John,
Beautiful!!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on June 15, 2009 03:33:19 PM Report
great write jon, sounded a bit perverted at the beginning no offence, but beautifully crafted.

~Robin

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 15, 2009 12:22:05 AM Report
Now it is my time for no words. One please? Beautiful!!!!

 

 

Hugs;

Moonie

Comment By: FreeSerenity on June 15, 2009 12:21:24 AM Report
Beautiful write. ^^
Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on June 15, 2009 12:08:30 AM Report
TJohn, this really sounds like a song...one sung like a chorus along with the clear sound of a flute...no, maybe a soprano saxaphone...or possibly just sung from the mountain top echoing from valley to valley...anyway a song so beautiful!   YF Linda




 


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