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Author Name: Freeariesgirl 16 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2009 23:06:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Slow that Mustang Down
The purr in my soul vibrates, securely.
Surely uncovered, so come on, Insure me.
Inspect my carriage, outside and in.
Suds me up, rinse me, wax me in sin.
 
Silky and shiny, touch my behind.
Rev me up and I'll roar as designed!
As we go faster and faster in greed.
I take in the wind and my need for speed.
 
Pushing my button, I get this urge.
On impulse I get an exotic surge.
The horsepower kicked in, I'm bucking wild.
The stick, switch gears, I'm not trucking mild.
 
A lean machine, if you know what I mean.
An art to the eye, all polished and clean.
Exotic in leather as you enter the vault.
The climax ends when we come to a halt.
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 16, 2009 02:11:07 PM Report
you know, my first car was a 1966 Mustang with that awesome little 289 V-8.  As much as I loved that car, I don't think I've ever seen/heard of that particular kind of "hot wax" job.  Pushing the button always prompts that urge, doesn't it?  Oh, and congrats on the award, too!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on October 15, 2009 10:21:16 AM Report
Love, love the metaphors within~!!  Very clever, deserving of the Award, Jennifer~!  CONGRATZ~!
Margaret...the Baglady

Comment By: Freejoey on October 6, 2009 11:25:27 AM Report
I would love to take that mustang for a ride. Very creative poem. Congrats on the award
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 24, 2009 03:39:11 AM Report
Who wouldn't love this one. The depth of your expressive tone is fantastic.
It makes me want to Wax ,,,He He He

Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 4, 2009 08:43:36 PM Report
Congratulations Jennifer. This is something else! What a terrific write.

                                                                      John

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 30, 2009 09:40:32 AM Report
First of all , congratulations on the award for this intensely erotic and sexy poem! Second, where do I send the bill for burning my fingers on this? Super hot Jen!   Henry
Comment By: FreeAngelface on June 30, 2009 08:33:42 AM Report
Jen congratulations for your feathered poem! You did a awesome job here! Thank you for sharing hun!

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 29, 2009 08:25:06 AM Report
Jennifer:  congratulations for the Feature Poem Award for this excellent write.  Keep up the good writes.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 27, 2009 08:36:13 AM Report

enjoyed the metaphors and suggestions used....leaves the imagination to fill in the rest.

Ali x

Comment By: FreeJulie on June 22, 2009 11:51:34 PM Report

Oh...so that's why guys love their muscle cars?!  Just teasing.  This was fantastic, and fast, and erotic, and intense, and wow...just awesome.


Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on June 16, 2009 07:36:47 PM Report

Good writing Jennifer.  Your creativity always amazes me.


 


 


Comment By: FreeTia Bayer on June 16, 2009 12:02:16 PM Report
Oh God, I LOVE this! It's so raw and exotic at the same time. It really revs you up with you read it. Definitely a favorite!

-Tia

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 16, 2009 10:17:18 AM Report
Jen,
 So creative as always... Some times you just gotta slow down
that wild horse...
 Love ya! ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 16, 2009 09:18:47 AM Report
Jennifer:  very clever wording!!!  Did enjoy.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on June 16, 2009 08:49:13 AM Report
loved your metaphor...enjoy!!   not everyone gets the opportunity to drive their little mustang this fast and furious so dont put on the brakes too soon...little mustangs haver a way of slowing down on their own...just remember not to go so fast that you miss the beautiful scenery...Linda
Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on June 16, 2009 12:02:28 AM Report
Yippee, a wild Mustang!   Cute poem, I like it very much.   Savannah

 





 


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