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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: June 23, 2009 19:06:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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So many snowmen
So many Snowmen
 
A build of melted dreams
Full of promised hands
We place our thoughts
And melt into snowmen
I long for the sun
Melt me away
A frozen night
Will not melt my dreams away.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 3, 2009 08:49:57 PM Report
"A frozen night will not melt my dreams away..." Ingenious!
Comment By: FreeAdri on June 24, 2009 03:00:21 AM Report
I love the metaphor you used, so brilliantly illustrated. 
As always, a amazing piece!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 23, 2009 11:57:52 PM Report
Dreams melt sometimes ......the sun does  his job..

  as long as it is  together

with your angel snow .....melting into each other ...

 mystery speaks.... 

Always `  She Whispers.

 

Comment By: FreeWinston Taylor on June 23, 2009 10:03:18 PM Report
Nice job saying all there is to say in so few words, Thumbs up on a job well done. Winston




 


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