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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: June 25, 2009 19:06:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Into me
Into me
 
I fell into me
Found many tortures
I crusified myself
Finding older shoulders
Why does the night
Find me looking
Into me
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Comment By: FreeAngel on August 31, 2009 09:19:28 AM Report
The night is always the most empty, an we reflect upon what we feel inside. If we try to do our best for others and the best in life we are half way there my friend xxx

 

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Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on June 27, 2009 07:02:27 PM Report
TJohn, it is natural for one to peer into his kidneys, the innermost personality and discover things "in the shadows" that  he  wants to change...but while he is there... he should also peer into his heart..."the sunshine of the body"... the seat of motivation...to realize  that his motives are positive and good.  Linda
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 26, 2009 08:59:58 AM Report
The night has a way of putting doubts in our mind....
wanting some one so badly..
 WE just have to sort how what and who we want and then take a leap of faith and just try... We all get hurt that is just life...
Go for it if it feels good in the guts..
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 26, 2009 01:51:43 AM Report
You are not looking deep enough, and your sight might be impaired; remember you don't see what the world sees...

It is a very intense, well crafted piece, that leaves the question open to us all, and the realization that we can also be TOO critical over ourselfs. 
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumAngelface on June 25, 2009 07:27:34 PM Report
Maybe cause you hold alot of quilt inside? Only you can determine that question within. This was a very interresting write! Keep up the wonderful work.

 

Infinity





 


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