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Author Name: Freesheedreams 11 Comments
Date Added: June 30, 2009 07:06:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Voice of the River
a cool crystal beginning
so pristine and pure
cover me with your warm blanket
 of soft green moss from your velvet banks
sing me a sweet lullaby with your tiny alpine flowers
that bloom between the rocks
and delight my sleepy eyes
 
winding river speaks
 many languages...has many colors of  skin
wake me with your early sound of school bells
fill my storehouse to the brim
teach me with your sunshine and rainbows
unlock the secret person from within
 
dance me to the beat of a different drum
from your wide banks spring many answers
only I can see
 teach me to listen to the wild voice of the river
take me to a new beginning
lift me up and set me free
 
O wild and raging river...swollen from the storm
my thighs no longer need your deep water
to keep them happy
 just give me a shallow basin...
and a few dewdrops 
to tickle my toes
 
find me a home
on your muddy banks
plant me with the cypress trees and  hanging moss
comfort me with Love's sweet bouquet
calm my fears...ease my strife
no longer pristine and pure your waters still hold the truth for me
I am grateful you have deposited me ever so gently
on the delta of my life....
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
the mighty Mississippi River marks its beginnging as a crisp mountain stream, gathers force, widens, deepens, narrows, swells with storms, changes course, deposits soil onto the river delta, and finally empties into the Gulf of Mexico.  This is my personal journey down the winding river and what it has taught me.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on May 9, 2010 06:51:38 PM Report
The wild wild river run in my vains. Thanks for bringing this poem to my attention. Outstnding Write!

                                                                                                                Dr. Jay

Comment By: FreeMichael Motil on January 3, 2010 07:46:23 PM Report
Linda Jo, the river seems to be a living metaphor of life around you and  reflects your sense of life within you. I really like this poem. And like it more each time I read it. Thanks, Mike.
Comment By: Freeobohwemu o. kennedy on December 25, 2009 09:07:09 AM Report
A master tribute. Thumps up!
Comment By: Freeraymond l minnick on December 24, 2009 06:09:57 PM Report
Excellent and congratulations! I do believe that the secret person has already been unlocked a long time ago. Ray
Comment By: FreeAndrew on December 22, 2009 09:29:57 PM Report
the imagery of this work is insprirational in and of itself, but your way of weaving this story is masterful.  clearly deserving of this award. 
Comment By: Freeb w mayer on December 21, 2009 07:24:41 PM Report
You are on a roll! Congratulations! This is a great piece.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 21, 2009 11:41:05 AM Report
Linda Jo:  Congratulations for the Feature Poem Award.  This write so totally deserved recognition.

 

Lady D

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on July 5, 2009 09:41:29 PM Report
Linda, you've written a wonderful poem with such grand description! I love the way you give the river the power to teach life's lessons. Excellent piece of writing!   Henry
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 1, 2009 12:52:08 PM Report
Thanks for sharing
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 30, 2009 06:34:20 PM Report
Linda,
This is just a great story...I enjoy your style  of writing..
 Your such a vivid writer
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 30, 2009 08:16:10 AM Report
Linda:  lovely and very descriptive write.  You do Nature writes very well....

 

Lady D





 


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