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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 5 Comments
Date Added: July 11, 2009 00:07:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Under the Lamp Light
under the lamp light...
unclothe love's definition tonight...
iridescent self-portrait of sheer delight...
green-eyed mirror ricochets in the moonlight...
 
no more summer time blues...hers are skin-tight...
sensibility takes flight...
a chiffon breeze whispers slight...
impossible to keep emotions carefree and light...
our very existence sails like a red kite...
take your time mr. daylight...
no more summer time blues...on a one-way flight...
 
amid the unshackled vanishing starlight...
on this translucent summer night...
hands grasp xenon tight...
under the lamp light...
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
inspired by Ellie and the summer-time blues...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on July 16, 2009 11:51:41 PM Report
Wonderful write!
Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 11, 2009 10:16:51 PM Report
You write so well. Linda.

                                   John

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 11, 2009 12:51:03 AM Report
I just love the last stanza! Plus the part where you say "take your time mr. daylight." Awesome. Someone should do a write entitled Take Your Time Mr. Daylight. It souds like it'd be a good title.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 8, 2009 09:27:26 AM Report
As always amazing poem your something lady....
 We all get inspired... by other poets..
~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 8, 2009 08:14:52 AM Report
Aw. Thanks. And you had better rhymes than me! I liked how you used "vanishing starlight" and "one-way flight". Those were my faves! This is going in my faves!




 


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