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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2009 17:07:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Surrender
I Surrender
 
I have never spoken more truer words
That i care to remember
But i surrender to you.
My heart is full of silence
A life left up to you
I softly surrender
I hope you remember
My surrender to you.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumAngelface on July 10, 2009 08:49:09 AM Report
This is just so beautiful... I'm sure she still remembers!!! Go to her and tell her how you feel! Set your heart free!

 

Angelface

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on July 9, 2009 05:05:41 PM Report
John a sincere and honest poem of great depth and

serenity, thankyou for sharing.

Colin

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 9, 2009 03:13:42 AM Report
This is gorgeous.  That is the truth of true love, to give yourself over to the one you love...  Totally amazing John, I love it! 
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on July 8, 2009 09:04:09 PM Report
John, i especially like the line, "my heart is full of silence" as if it is just waiting for a chance to express all...completely.  shee
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 8, 2009 05:50:36 PM Report
Oh, This is brilliant .. every line with sincere honesty...
 Surrender unto him...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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