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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: July 18, 2009 10:07:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My empty yesterday
My empty yesterday
 
My every step
Leaves me empty
I have a life of empty
So full of plenty
I want the darkness in your eyes
Like a stillpond in moonlight
I have only empty yesterdays
To fill your heart.
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 22, 2009 09:40:08 AM Report
John,
 How did I miss this?? I try to read every poem you write...
 Love is grand.... Be happy my friend....
 Hugs She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 19, 2009 12:44:11 PM Report
Love it a two way street, and what you feel are felt.

Beautiful piece, a gem. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeHanane on July 18, 2009 05:32:48 PM Report
Empty is a word that really frightens John. i don't like it I fell shivering.Brrrrr!

But with your structured sentence and meaningful words; it said a lot.

 

yours,

HAN

Comment By: Freeabby on July 18, 2009 05:06:19 PM Report
Empty yesterdays speak of fulfilled tomorrows 

Lessons of empty yesterdays forge

the present and the sun yet to rise

with plenty...

despite the darkness in the eyes

like a stillpond in moonlight

the empty yesterdays

will fill the heart with plenty.

Great poem this, I like the faith

in plenty even in emptiness   

Comment By: PremiumAngelface on July 18, 2009 03:36:39 PM Report
Sounds like your in love, dear john! Wonderfully penned piece of work you have here!

 

Angelface

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on July 18, 2009 11:03:28 AM Report
 days that are filled with longing  fill the heart with empty to the point of overflowing...but create from within a pure heart...and an earnest poet...who expresses the deepest of feelings so  pure and true.

YF 





 


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