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Author Name: FreeCaryndw 4 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2003 09:09:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Not Just A Pretty Face (For JakeInAz!)
I met his guy his name is Jake,
go read the poetry he can make.

He has so much emotion deep inside,
like little bits of him that has died.

He spills them out on to our paper,
the ink like a mist of water vapor.

He had no picture posted at first,
thinking his seriousness, it had cursed.

But you see Jake, it's what's inside,
that your poems can not hide.

For in the poems that you write,
we all can see that inner light.

Not all are interested in a pretty face,
so lead us others to your inner place.

Show us your soul on your paper,
leave us feeling vulnerable like a raper.

Show us your passion and desire,
set us to flame like a roaring fire.

Lead us down the paths of your pain,
your poems of it, should hold no shame.
Author's Notes:
For Jake...
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Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on December 17, 2009 11:27:22 PM Report
lmao...I can't believe I forgot about this! You're such a gem :)
Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on January 31, 2007 12:02:29 AM Report
More than three years later I read this, guess I'm a lil behind, lol. This is so sweet and really truly what Jake is. Amazing.

Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on October 7, 2003 05:22:21 AM Report that's one heck of a tribute. Technically that is a great poem but as for the message...I'm speachless. Thanks you darlin!
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on September 25, 2003 10:08:56 AM Report
Jake will like this
Great Write
Jason Brown


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