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Author Name: Freestormwolf 8 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2009 11:07:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Parallels
"Like a poet needs the pain"
Bon Jovi
 

Here I find myself caught in reverie.

Sanguine lips, thighs, yearning .

Far away over seas of aquamarine

he waits for changing seasons.

The sand is on his mouth where he kissed the red earth;

While his spirit sings softly of days wrenched from his grasp.

Still, in the night air

 I feel him,

always.

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Comment By: FreeM J W Hayes on September 28, 2009 09:08:37 AM Report
I don't know why but this seemed rather erotic despite the absence of He,

Michael

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 21, 2009 03:41:54 PM Report
Indeed, parallels....Such longing, and such stillness in return....
I love the write, Ali...

In Light....Margaret.....

Comment By: FreeJessica Ruth Myr on July 27, 2009 05:35:50 AM Report
This is very lyrical and very heartfelt -- the way that it seems to come out in breathy, breathless phrases is just perfect.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 27, 2009 03:58:14 AM Report
This is lovely Ali its almost songlike in its simplicity,emotions laid bare to the bones and as sweet as you like~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 26, 2009 06:51:05 PM Report
Your passion so sultry ... Your need such longing..... Your love so sincere...
I love this pretty lady....
 Hugs She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on July 26, 2009 06:33:48 PM Report
A powerful evocation of love and loss Alison. I especialy liked this line:-

 

The sand is on his mouth  where he kissed the red earth;

 

It seemed to evoke so much.

 

David

 

 

 

 

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on July 26, 2009 05:00:43 PM Report
Oh sweet Ali this is beautiful, so rich and gentle with soft yearnings and passions

that sail across a silver sea to life itself.

Thankyou for sharing.

Colinxxx

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on July 26, 2009 12:06:27 PM Report
this reaches within me and reminds me of history, dispicable and cruel...innocent and strong men ripped from their land and away from their families to become the slaves of plantation owners...yet our eyes finally see a changing season...it is also a reminder of my youthful history but i wont go into that...i know this is not exactly what you wrote about...but a good piece always takes the reader on his/her own journey so i hope this does not detract from your lovely and personal write...shee




 


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