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Comment By:  Angelface on July 27, 2009 08:13:53 AM |
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Another fine piece you have here pops, lol ... Being that I am a country gal through and through... I love to fish, as I bait my own hook too. I find this time by the river draws me close to the one who taught me about the Lord above when I was a child! " He was my ' gramps' yeppers my grandpa! He died and went home to the good Lord, 1990 I was only 15, going on 16. I miss him dearly! I so enjoyed this write! Brought back some really good memories for me! Thank you for sharing!
Hugs Angelface
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Comment By:  Adri on July 27, 2009 06:17:38 AM |
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A breathtaking scene you painted here with your words. Lovey piece and even the tone and emotion is well evident.
I love this
Adri x
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| Comment By: She Whispers on July 26, 2009 07:08:05 PM |
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John,
Love this... I was raised on a river bank...So I love to fish and always will... Such a peacefulness with nature....
Just to get away from every thing is just great..
Hugs She Whispers
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| Comment By: Amy on July 26, 2009 06:42:02 PM |
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Love the scene you've painted with words, John. I love to fish and any poem that captures the thrill of fishing and the nature that surrounds the act is a winner with me. I noticed a small typo in line 5. I think you've one too many 'the's. Just thought you'd want to know. ;o)
Enjoyed
~Amy
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| Comment By: Amy on July 26, 2009 06:41:50 PM |
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Love the scene you've painted with words, John. I love to fish and any poem that captures the thrill of fishing and the nature that surrounds the act is a winner with me. I noticed a small typo in line 5. I think you've one too many 'the's. Just thought you'd want to know. ;o)
Enjoyed
~Amy
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on July 26, 2009 05:27:10 PM |
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Sounds very peaceful, John...I would go fishing more if I ever actually caught a fish, but maybe catching fish isnn't the main point, eh?...len
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| Comment By: colin skilton on July 26, 2009 05:05:00 PM |
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JOhn ah the joys of fishing, lazily watching the day slowly unwind
as the planet walkers crazily fire past in angry exchanges. a beautiful
way to pass the time.
Colin
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| Comment By: Linda Jo on July 26, 2009 12:20:02 PM |
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reminds me of fishing on the Gulf of Mexico or viewing the banks of sleepy bayous from the water. i especially liked "the white washed houses raised like the sun-kissed faces of flowers" like houses on stilts, reaching for the sun... living across the sea our worlds are different but in some cases, the same.
beautiful and concise.
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| Comment By: Aminath Agleema on July 26, 2009 12:05:19 PM |
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beautiful. I enjoy every line of the poem
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