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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: August 05, 2009 09:08:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Love
I Love
 
Misty nights
Candle lights
Suggestion
Of more
Maybe the wine speaks
For me
But i love you
I can hear butterflies wings
Dew drops
Dripping from empty trees.
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Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 5, 2009 01:25:32 PM Report
I like it very much...

 

I like the I love ....misty nights, candle lights, then jump to Maybe the wine speaks...
Just a loving suggestion, as "suggestion Of more" is a 'given'...
Hugs...Margaret...

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 5, 2009 11:03:13 AM Report
JOHN,
 ANOTHER POEM OF LOVE FOR YOUR LOVLY LADY...CANDLES AND WINE...
 I SEE SHE IS WAITING TO EMBRACE THE EVENING ... WITH LOVE IN YOUR EYES ..

Love waits with patience....
Alwasy ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeb w mayer on August 5, 2009 10:46:20 AM Report
A wonderful piece...I suggest you shorten it up just a bit:

 

Maybe the wine speaks

For me

But i love you

I can hear butterflies wings

Dew drops as they

Drip from empty trees

 

The first few lines were too sing song for me. Once I got past them I saw the simple beauty of the work. Again, well done!

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 5, 2009 10:07:47 AM Report
This is gorgeous.  Misty nights and candle lights...I love that too. 
You are a master of words.  Stunning!
Adri x
Comment By: PremiumAngelface on August 5, 2009 10:07:35 AM Report
I love all of this too.. woo hoo.. You write with such inspirational words. When you say
But i love you

" I can hear butterflies wings

Dew drops

Dripping from empty trees. " 

 

Does this mean you hear empty I love you's from someone you love? If so it's a very sad write! Cause who couldn't love you!!!  Your sweet, and a loveable guy, pops!!

 

Angelface





 


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