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Author Name: Freealligator 1 Comments
Date Added: August 06, 2009 15:08:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Conversation

He said that a kind man is a ghost
because his soul is swollowed
it is gone and all that remained are ashes...

Is He all right or not?

She said but the kinddest man is not alone
one day he will be rewarded
those to whom he gave a hand won't forget
they all keep for him a special present

Is she all right or not?

I didn't want to be involved
but I have got my own word
I said:being kind is a defect
it is a meek weakness of you and me
but though I am unable to change
I want to be a different one

Who is right then!

The conversation was still as long as the ancient tale
but the difference is that there was no hero
our thoughts were expressed to fill in the universe with breath
since air was no more but a poison choking everybody's heart
No verdict will be done

He is gone and left the wind blows bitterly
She is still dreaming innocently of a bright tomorrow
and I am writing such verses to return to when I will be homesick

I didn't want to be involved
but I was there listening to their hidden thoughts
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 6, 2009 03:28:59 PM Report
Hanane,
 I read this twice trying to get the whole meaning.... Some of it not sure???
But a most interesting  poem anyway.
.
Your comments are such a treasure..
. thank you pretty lady...
visiting my humble page...
Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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