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Author Name: FreePoet_By_Heart 2 Comments
Date Added: August 12, 2009 18:08:14 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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In Anothers Eyes
  In Anothers Eyes       In anothers eye's I am perfect just the way I am I don't have to be someone' he wants me to be For in anothers eye's I'm loved for me For the true beauty within me, he can see I don't have to pretend or give of myself Until I am breathless and wore slap out For in anothers eye's I wear his stars Deeply within my eyes they shine so bright He is my Romeo and I am his Juliet Together we make music' louder than a love song He is my laughtier' in the morning sun He is my shelter when I need a place to run He holds me close and lets no one near He comforts me in my time of hurts and fears When you have ran off to someone else He gives me hope with out a doubt I know he loves me, and I love him back I am his strawberry and he is my cream In another's eyes I am his everything Whenever I allow him he'll run to me He'll hold me close' and never let you hurt me, again He'll take from you what you care nothing about For in another's eyes you are a scum For you only want me' when you want some I am nothing to you... you animal.. you scorn beast A man I once loved.. but have come to despise Your touch is not the same upon my body You have tortured me way to long You care less how much you physically abuse me In another's eyes' I long to be standing in front of So that when you come in sight he will be my guiding light Protecting me from the rays of your strife For he is my King, even though I'm your wife
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Comment By: Freewalter stephon holloway on June 10, 2014 02:50:36 PM Report
others eyes always see what those who are close do not, they are forgiving and new. They see light that dwells deep within, they sometimes see a love and wish it was for them......
Comment By: FreeBrian Davy on August 12, 2009 08:29:11 PM Report
I really enjoy the progression of this poem and then the radical shift coming after the line "For in another's eyes you are a scum." Then the ending is awesome and unexpected. Well done.
Brian





 


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