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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 5 Comments
Date Added: August 16, 2009 17:08:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Was Thinking of You and Just Wanted to Say...
I was thinking of you and just wanted to say...   You are the cream in my coffee, strong and black I wonder if you will be sharing a witty comeback Oh, I have been known to have a comeback or two, Especially with sugar as sweet as you   That's good but here is another thing I wanted to say...   You are my dictionary when I can't find the right word Making suggestions so my poems don't sound so absurd. If you search a little deeper, I'm sure you will find I'm also a thesaurus to strengthen your mind   Oh, I like that but listen to this...   You are the feather that tickles me under the chin Calling me sweet PIA and your little pumpkin You're more than a pumpkin; you're the cream of the crop You're the Garden of Eden, are you ready to stop?   You are too kind, but this is for you...   You are the numbers arranged on my 10-key pad Without you I find...it's too difficult to add You are Generous, Loyal...and my True Sugar-Dad And you are my number , when day is all done I may be  Sugar Dad but you're Sugar Mom # 1   Oh come on, don't flatter me...   You're the chocolate in my chocolate soiree' My chocolate sundae, chocolate kisses, and my chocolate flambe' Well  you are  the whipped cream on top of my pie And just like my favorite, the apple of my eye   You humble me...   You are my steaming pot of crawfish, and the oyster in my stew You're my beginning, my ending, and the start of every Roux I may be your Roux, but you are my bowl of Gumbo My spicy little dish that always steals the show   I just can't help myself...   You're the sting that sends me into anaphylactic shock! I mean that in a good way...do you have time to talk? Oh, I have time to talk. so I just wanted to say You're my Louisiana hot sauce, you blow me away!   OK...you win!!     
Author's Notes:
this was a co-write between Travis and myself. It's called a game of one up-manship.  Thanks Travis!  this was great fun!  My words in pink...his in blue...
 
I am re-posting it so I will have it in my vault...to keep and to cherish.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 6, 2009 12:03:43 AM Report
This is the sweetest game of one up-manship I've ever had the priviledge to read. Whoo hoo...you're the best Linda......oh wait maybe you're the best Travis.....ARGHHHHHH......you both are, now what will I do??? I can't choose!!!! Fun, fun, fun...absolutely amusing!! =)) Well done you two crazy kids!

 

~Barbara~ *suddenly craving chocolate* 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 17, 2009 12:17:23 PM Report
This is as cute as it can be.... You two need to do more along this line....
Always  ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeS on August 17, 2009 01:04:32 AM Report
very awesome .. love what you guys came up with 
very fun and sweet 

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 16, 2009 05:20:26 PM Report
Great fun~!  Loved it, you two...

Anytime you wish to gift us with more...???
The baglady.....off to get some gumbo..

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 16, 2009 05:15:10 PM Report
Linda and Travis:  this is so cute and "spicy".  You two really duel/deal it out!!!!

 

Lady D





 


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