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Author Name: FreeWriterguy2 11 Comments
Date Added: August 16, 2009 20:08:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Just a Minute

Sixty seconds a minute does make,

Fifty-nine then fifty-eight.

At fifty-seven you think the present will stay,

Down to fifty-five yet you lost two right away.

From fifty-four it moves down to forty-five,

The realization hits, time does fly!

Forty-three down to thirty now all gone,

With twenty-nine left time has moved on.

Your mind now ponders that, which is left,

That unspoken word and unfulfilled dream in your head.

With twenty- five to go you begin right away,

To right the wrong and plan for the day.

As each second now ticks and you move to the end,

You wished from the start you had made time your friend.

Now the clock shows only fifteen linger,

You begin to make them count and feel rather languor.

Ten now left, Nine, Eight, then Seven,

Soon it will be five and no time for reflection.

You promise yourself with the last four,

The next minute will be different than the one before.

Excited now about the new prospect,

This minute counts down to where it will exit.

It is now the last second, fifty-nine did go by,

Your mind on the next as this minute has died.

Only one thing you failed to consider,

Time gives us this moment with no promise of a future.

The next minute has begun and the opportunity exists,

But for you dear friend your time just finished.

For us who remain we now have sixty-seconds,

My question to you is

What will you do with this minute?

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFilthy on September 20, 2010 07:10:00 PM Report
Well this site is called Creative-Poems...and this is just that! Really good write mate, and more than deserving of that award.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on October 1, 2009 08:36:54 PM Report
Congratulations on the award.  Much deserving.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 1, 2009 11:01:37 AM Report

Brian:  congratulations on the Feature Poem award for this write.


Lady Dragonwyck 


Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 1, 2009 12:53:35 AM Report
Hi Brian,
I am so pleased to see an award for this great piece.
A big congratulations to you!
~Tracie
Comment By: Freejess on October 1, 2009 12:47:33 AM Report
I really enjoyed this piece. congrats on winning the award for this
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 30, 2009 11:59:44 PM Report
congratulations!  when you look at time in a creative way...even a minute is big...and award winning.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 24, 2009 01:29:59 PM Report
 What a very wonderful poem it does make you think...Time fleets so swiftly... We must enjoy each moment...
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 18, 2009 03:50:28 PM Report

Time certainly slips away...seconds count. This poem is good food for thought.


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 17, 2009 10:25:12 AM Report
Hi, Brian.....What a great brain awakening write you have produced for us~!  This had to be a tricky combination of writing and planning...I applaud you, and I liked it a lot~!
Margaret, the Baglady

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 16, 2009 10:00:28 PM Report
Brian,
This is such a thought provoking and well written write.
I think you should submit for the Featured Poem Award...good stuff!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAngelface on August 16, 2009 09:23:13 PM Report
I will thank God I ran across this write, as I respond that I will pray I live for another 20 yrs. lol at the least. I want see my children grow up and see that they have what it takes to live for the moment, not for tomorrow! For we never know what tomorrow may bring! I really like this write alot! You did an excellant job, my friend!

 

Angelface





 


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