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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 5 Comments
Date Added: August 17, 2009 22:08:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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hello, this is Victoria
I have something very important to say
so please listen
I've been searching for you
and I think you might be my mother
you see, my husband works
at the university
in the office of Multi-Cultural Affairs
he introduced me to the director, Mr Smith
he stared into my eyes
as if he was hypnotised
I traced his steps as he walked across the room
where books on art, architecture, etc. were kept
he pulled out the latest edition of
Quilt Sampler Magazine
there was a picture of a lady
with my same green eyes
Could that be your article on portrait quilts?
well yes but...
oh mama, we talked...words flowed;
along with a flood of tears
he said I have a combination of your smile and his lips
and without a doubt, your personality
oh my darling baby girl...I've waited a lifetime to hear your voice...
I know mama, my only ambition has been to find you
but at times it was dampened by fear...
fear that you would rather live a secluded life...
while never recovering from the day of our seperation...
the day of my birth
oh my baby girl...excuse me my darling, I mean Victoria...
say no more mama, I know you must be overwhelmed from
our attention demanding conversation...
Here's my me in the morning,
we will surely make plans to meet very soon
And mama...
I have a daughter...
her name is Sara
Author's Notes:
thank you Travis for that inspiring word list! 
ordinary     architecture     important     portrait     personality     edition    traced     demanding     secluded     recovering     magazine     combination     ambition     Sara
the privilege was mine!
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Comment By: FreeLeila on January 10, 2010 01:05:11 AM Report
Hello Linda,

What an emotional scene!



Comment By: FreeTina Steele on August 24, 2009 09:15:56 PM Report
wow this is amazing! very deep and written in a story format, very nice ending. :)

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 18, 2009 10:24:51 AM Report
Oh, how endearing to read a happy ending...this probably happens a lot in this ol' world....I admire the way you approached the subject and how you wrote hope in the lines...
Nicely done, Linda Jo..
Margaret....who has a strange family tree...

Comment By: FreeSteve on August 18, 2009 04:30:35 AM Report
You're very good at that !
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 17, 2009 11:44:19 PM Report
You two open al the doors....
heartfelt... Hugs She Whispers


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