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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: August 19, 2009 03:08:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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crescent moon
crescent moon my light
exposing a heart once sliced
cool..crisp...and concise
 
Author's Notes:
inspired by Ashi's half moon haiku
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTina Steele on August 24, 2009 09:10:58 PM Report
short, straight to the point, very beautifully written.

Comment By: TrialAnn on August 19, 2009 05:22:29 PM Report
Nice style in this, I like the alliteration too.
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 19, 2009 04:50:53 PM Report
Excellent Haiku....Excellent form....Beautifully visual, Linda Jo....
Margaret...the Bagperson
Comment By: FreeHanane on August 19, 2009 11:33:38 AM Report
I swear you wrote Haiku with such a talent and breath dear Linda. I am proud of you are writing lately. from my side, apparently I lost the stuff, I will need a support of you.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 19, 2009 09:10:32 AM Report
Inspiration at its best....
Don't you love being inspired??

Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 19, 2009 04:09:55 AM Report
Both is very good!  Stunning imagery created in a few words.  I love Haiku's, can't write them to save my life, but I love them. LOL 
Wonderful write.
Adri x





 


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