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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: August 19, 2009 21:08:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sparrow
Sparrow
 
He watches her
She finds food
He protects her
In the hunt.
There is no comfort
In his heart
Sleeping trees
Full of memories
He waits for her
While she dreams softly.
He flies in gifted skies
The sun a welcome friend
Say's she will come
He waits in a different tree
She finds the food
He will always protect her.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 21, 2009 01:19:10 AM Report
Happiness requires something to do, something to love and something to hope for. ~Swahili~

 

Our dreams give us wings John. Sweet sentiments nicely presented!!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 20, 2009 02:51:46 AM Report
I love the metaphor you use here, it is very true, and it fits perfectly. Love so true, is meant to be.  Lovely, I love it. 

Thank you
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumAngelface on August 19, 2009 10:02:03 PM Report
This sounds like love for sure! I once had a friend, who was a airplane pilot. He was to me more than these words could ever write! But this poem, reminded me of his love! I had no choice but to let him go.. Somedays I think of him more than others. I pray He is happy with his new life! Thats all I;ve ever wanted for him was to be truly happy! He deserves that and more! With all my heart! Thank you for sharing this piece!

 

Hugs Angelface

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on August 19, 2009 09:33:52 PM Report
I wish you happiness and birdsong!  ...and waiting that doesn't take too long...shee




 


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