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Author Name: Freejohncarter 1 Comments
Date Added: August 22, 2009 04:08:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Breath
Your Breath
 
If you held your breath long enough for you to see
Maybe your final moment would be me
If i hated every second of you
Cursed every step you took
Hated your words
Your final breath
Would be the love on my lips.
 
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My Dad's Birthday
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Comment By: FreeAdri on August 22, 2009 05:30:10 PM Report
Wow, very intense poem. Our scars stay with us forever, it does heal, but it is still there.
I'm sorry...
Adri xxx


 


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