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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: August 27, 2009 12:08:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Like The Sea
Like The Sea
 
She tastes just like the sea
That crashes over me
Full of wants and needs
I need to feel the sea
Crashing over me
Feel the pull in the ebb
The drag of seabed
The sea cries
My body lies
Just waiting for your hand
Just like a mermaid
You rise
I am at your command
Take me
With all the shiny pebbles
You steal every night.
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Comment By: FreeM J W Hayes on September 11, 2009 05:56:11 AM Report
Very evocative in the sounds of the shorelines of the sea.

Michael

Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on August 27, 2009 08:57:54 PM Report
wonderful and powerful...packed in a small package of sweet romantic dynamite!

it also has the perfect ebb and flow like the pull of the sea...this is a great poem!  Ljo

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 27, 2009 02:14:16 PM Report
I'm with Maggie...  Double WOW! I am blown away but this masterpiece. It is so amazingly beautiful. The sea hold some sort of magic, and it brings people to each other. 
Beautiful
Adri x

Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on August 27, 2009 12:35:19 PM Report
How romantic.  I really enjoyed this wow and double wow!




 


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