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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: August 29, 2009 11:08:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Humor Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
circus psycho
they said in Louisiana it would rarely snow
but along came an arctic snow storm
a perfect escort; for my beau
scientifically lean, abstract...
a real circus psycho
 
blindfolds, surmises, suppression; limbo
an eclipse of critical thought
emotionally frozen, treacherous...
my last night of passion
seemed like a hundred years ago!
 
i hoped interfusion would melt the snow
but silent words of warning returned
as i heard the rooster crow
found myself dominated by an Egyptian pharaoh
i was once pragmatic; now my lucidity a dream
said bye bye to sanity as it flew out the window
 
they said in Louisiana it would rarely snow
but i've lived through the longest winter
wishing for sunshine and the perfect rainbow
mama said...it's time to buy that boy a ticket
and ship him back to California, Fresno!
 
so next time my sha darlin' when you think you know
dont be fooled by the words of a circus psycho
if you're looking for music; try the ole banjo
and never give an icicle a taste of your summer's glow
for he is a fake; a confusing pretense...with no real credo
he will make your last night of passion feel like a hundred years ago!
 
 
Author's Notes:
word bank words:  night of passion     surmises     dominated     psycho circus    pragmatic
 
suppression    scientifically      interfusion     eclipse of critical thought     silent    abstract
 
lucidity    
thank you Travis for these inspiring words that prompted my wayward thoughts...a humorous look back and lessons learned...
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 7, 2010 09:20:20 PM Report
Well, I do see a deeper story in this..... Brrr to that last night of passion, I got the chill.
You sure used the word bank with genius! 
Loved the title too. 
~Cindy 

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 19, 2010 12:19:31 AM Report
Oh my!!! Now this spiked my senses for sure.. I am flying on your words and rolling around in their wonder.. What a fantastic write. I so loved the 'Gone with the wind' flair to the style.. The way you made the sound of it flow..

 

This a keeper.. Because 'Frankly my dear, I do give a damn!' lol

 

 

Moonie xx 

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 21, 2009 04:52:27 PM Report
"never give an icicle a taste of your summer's glow"...fabulous line...I LOVE it. Awesome second stanza too...such a whirlwind of emotion. I can relate to this poem. Well done Linda...such a great message within. Girlfriend...I swear if you added a rap beat and a little background music you would have a best seller here! Good stuff....yum yum, your summer's glow looks delicious!!

 

~Barbara~ *Feeling it*

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 20, 2009 10:15:37 PM Report
Wonderful Wordbank!
You do these so well!
Bravo!

Comment By: Freejohn carter on September 4, 2009 08:42:11 AM Report
Excellent Linda. You really do these wordbanks so well.

                                                                           John

Comment By: FreeBlack on August 30, 2009 08:50:55 PM Report
I enjoyed this, its takes you places not many poems venture to, so long as you can follow that is. I had to read this twice to fully appreciate what you were going for, but I think I have a better understanding after the second time around. I look at this poem as a critic would a good movie, I can't wait until others see it.





 


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