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Author Name: Freemidnight 3 Comments
Date Added: August 31, 2009 05:08:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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picture us
picture us as gods
being able to shape world
shaping it all around us
picturing us as those gods
we could bring such happyness and joy
but within that we can bring pain and sarrow
with so much power
we could go wrong
how could we not?
the facts just get to you
just by one simple little mistake
everything can come down
all that happyness you built
all that joy and plesentness
brought to you with pain and sadness
would you pictuure us as gods?
can you?
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Comment By: FreeRyan on February 6, 2014 10:46:09 PM Report
I truly admire this. Let's talk. :) I think between our writings we will certainly have things in commen.  Pain and sadness is something I relate too all too often.
Comment By: FreeJohnny on May 16, 2011 02:31:59 PM Report
Sometimes we can picture certain instances such as love to be superior, and it within those high expectations we will secretly develop a sense of skepticism. Although we may not realize it right away, we do this out of fear. In the end, fate may decide the correct outcome. Or maybe we will block fate. In any case, excellent poem. Should be proud of this one. :)
Comment By: FreeDon Romeo on October 10, 2009 02:56:39 PM Report
good poem


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