Today Is: Wednesday, October 23, 2019 04:11 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Freewilliamgoldenpen 5 Comments
Date Added: September 12, 2009 16:09:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 278
Total Views
Members: 16
Unique Members: 10
Guests: 663

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Face in the Canyon wall
The setting sun casts shadows of dappled light,
moving slowly along the canyon,
as it submits to the coming night.
 
Its beauty is mesmerizing in this lonely barren place,
yet, a mystic air accompanies, for in the rocks
can be seen, an Indian face.
 
Long ago, horse and rider in war-paint bright,
adorned this land, and far beyond,
now, some say, "All the warriors here have gone."
 
But for one, when shadows glide and gently lean,
his face with war bonnet can clearly be seen.
 
Each evening, as day gives way to night,
on seeing him, our eyes meet,
yet I feel no fear or fright.
 
For the emotions I feel, I have no explanation at all,
just a strange connection, with the face,
in the canyon wall.
Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'Face in the Canyon wall' Copyright © WilliamGoldenpen
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on November 27, 2009 10:20:26 AM Report
This is moving, William. I can see the shadows reveal the face as you describe it. Your connection with the American Indian is clear and certain. Well done. ML
Comment By: FreeSandra on September 13, 2009 08:53:56 AM Report
This has vivid imagery and a haunting reverie. It's really good.

 Dreamer

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 12, 2009 10:42:36 PM Report

Ahhhh....It's Williamgoldenpen, and he is here on site leaving his words to have us read~!  This work brought the reader to visualize the face upon the wall....Perhaps the Warrior knew you,....or WAS you...hmmmm....
Nicely penned...


Margaret....an ol' baglady


Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 12, 2009 05:38:08 PM Report
I grew-up in the southwest.  This poem takes me back to Zion.

Great poem.

 

Comment By: FreeM J W Hayes on September 12, 2009 05:07:06 PM Report
This was really effective--I wondered if this was an invention, or there is a canyon with that shadow effect.




 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 76
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday

Orhadahwe Thomas (31)

 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.